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Untitled by alarie-tano Untitled by alarie-tano
Gouache on paper, 30 x 35 cm

Name it yourself.
Interprete yourself.

When I started I had something completely different in mind. This developed from itself. Head is based on a painting by Klimt.
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Critique by oscillatesalot Apr 6, 2009, 5:38:59 PM
I think the subject is very imaginative and the clothing very creative. I would consider maybe just a little bit of color to kind of give her face a bit of life. There is a lot of symmetry in there which kind of reduces the interest level for me. The clothing and ornaments are very cool. The folds in the cloth in the chest are a bit too much and distracting to the my eye. I might consider reducing the amount of light over her head because it's pulling my interest away from the subject. You might consider a bit of a turn and some perspective as the frontal shots are really hard to pull off and a bit unnatural.
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Lucony Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist
It's just impressive. Erinnert mich an den Jugendstil..
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alarie-tano Nov 3, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Vielen Dank!
Vom Jugendstil Klimts wurde ich zu dem Bild inspiriert ;)
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Lucony Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist
Mhh.. man sollte eben das Kleingedruckte lesen. :)
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alarie-tano Nov 4, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
;)
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:iconlos-ilusos:
hey I see a skull below her neck! did you intend to do that?
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alarie-tano May 8, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Very good. Yes it was intended :) Perhaps you also noticed the brighter folds in the middle under the skull, indicating the teeth :)
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:iconlos-ilusos:
well once I noticed eyes and nose, I started to look for the rest of the face and yes I asumed that those folds were teeth, tougth they appear less obviously than the rest of the face :)
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alarie-tano May 12, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Well, you seem to be one of few who saw that skull at all :) But yes, the teeth are less obvious. The colors had to fit the materials still.
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Anguarius Oct 22, 2011   General Artist
Cool necklace :D
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alarie-tano Oct 22, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you!
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